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| Snow and Spindrift 2007-07-13 ch 1,  | abusei don't know why no one's reviewed this, it's really good. metaphorical, i think, and easy-flowing, and well constucted. i especially like how you never actually said you crashed but it was implyed all over the poem... nice job. i like the part with cough syrup too... an unusual and interesting reference |