Wow!
I Loved it =)

I'm beginning to recognize you as "unpredictable". That was definitely not predictable. It was sad, yes, but very powerful, if that's what you wanted to hear.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story!

~Sercus~

We're leading up to the climax here. Please don't be mad if I don't review a chapter or so because I can't stop reading!

Woah, family chaos here. Somewhat comical, yet distressing, and it all leads up to a confession, which is the title of the chapter, I might add.

Oh. My. God.

I have to congratulate you. There is exactly no way in the history of history that I could've guessed that. That was the ultimate of plot twist.

Oh, and nice name for this chapter.

Ooh, more mystery here. I'm liking it. Now Jesse knows Analise's interested in Shadow. No time for a review; I must read on!

Hah! I knew it! Score!

I don't really mind strange chapters. And funny scene between Marlie and Analise, by the way.

I like the last two lines of this one. And I agree with Chris. What an odd conversation!

Poor Shadow. Some people are so insensitive. I don't get them.

Or maybe I do... I would probably be Marlie in this story. Mysteries rock!

So Shadow goes to their school? I had a feeling.

I have a feeling Analise and Shadow are more than just humans, if you know what I mean. Something animal. Werewolves, perhaps?

That's all I've got for this chapter. Except, maybe I'm starting to understand Analise a little better.

I like horses. :D

Yes, I do realize that was random, thank you very much, but it's true! Yay Bullet!

I'm pretty sure the girl Shadow's talking about is one that was already mentioned.

Woah, I faved this story a long time ago but I'm just now reviewing. How's that for messed up? Anyway, sorry. Here I go.

I have this odd feeling that Rick has a bigger role than just as Jesse's boyfriend...

well, i prefered the ending at chapter 16, but the speech in this one was pretty good. very nice, i liked this story, but you're right, the ending was a bit rushed. still great though, yay analise!

I WISH THIS STORY WAS NOT OVER AS I LOVED AND ENJOYED IT EMENSLY

Now I'm dying to know how everyone will react... Is Rick gonna come out with his secret too? That would be interesting... I really like this so far! You must write the next chapter :)