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Reviews For: Smile, My Darling

duhkachild
2007-02-15
ch 1,
abuseso incredibly true. we just keep hacking away at the world that is supporting us. all the beauty around us is being tainted by money and greed and power-hungry fiends.
Diabolos
2007-02-12
ch 1, anon.
abusewuz wondering y u kept asking the person to smile when the world is so rotten. got it at the end :p
and as i mentioned b4. the reaper phrase is geewdd~~!
aptly named nony
2007-02-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh. I liked it. It's so true the world has become some cold whirlpool of doom. (You probably don't get what I'm saying but it makes sense in my head!). We need to warm it up with love, yo!
MsWriter
2007-02-06
ch 1,
abusevery nice, but depraved doesn't sound right, i think deprived. but that is all up to you. good job, me like :P
L. Kantenseter
2007-02-06
ch 1,
abuseHow very true! "Society is depraved." Truer words were never spoken. I'm particularly fond of the line, "And Nature herself flinches at our touch." It really is so cruel what we're doing the the world we reside in. Not like we care, because as you've pointed out, we seem to have lost all shreds of our humanity. But the fact that you can look so morosely upon the subject makes it all the more captivating, I think.

Lovely.

L. Kantenseter
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