FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| faithful.dream 2008-10-04 ch 16,  | abuseLOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH ! |
| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-08-23 ch 16, | abuseomg. that was so cute |
| Tracey 2008-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is fantastic! your characters are awesome =] |
| Bedlam Chaos 2008-08-03 ch 16, | abuseI had to work but I read this story instead. It made me smile a lot so I guess it was not wasted time :) The only thing I can put against it is the "fairy tale" atsmosphere. Like both of them are perfect and everything will ever go fine for them. I mean, you write well so it's okay but that's it. A tidy bit to much romance :) |
| mistress tee 2008-07-27 ch 16, | abuseaw, this is definitely so cute! I surely hope you write about Isaiah and Kaylie in college! that'd be so fun! :) |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-26 ch 15, | abusei love this - quirky and so romantic! |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-14 ch 16, | abuseanother winner from Ms. Moore..your talent should be a sin ;p |
| andee lee 2008-07-10 ch 16, | abuseThat was incredibly cute. Little Tommy Gnuts... I loved him, so. :-) LOL I just really enjoy the way you write. It's straight and to the point without being too impersonal... you're a really good writer. Anyways...I have honestly spent all day at work reading your stories, so if I get fired, I'm sending you a bill. Just kidding. But great work! Can't wait to read more. -Andee |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-07 ch 16, | abuseThis was so cute (the story and the ending). I really liked the story even though you had a few mistakes. Mainly names or missing letters - just little things. The only thing that I wasn't crazy about was how you made them constantly say 'i love you, i love you'. Sure, it was needed but I think it was a tad overused. Really good job :D |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseHaha I like the last sentence. Lol. I like how you make Kaylie seem so pretty yet real and down to earth at the same time. Few spelling mistakes but overall, I really liked this first chapter :) |
| The Olympic Poison 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI went camping the other weekend and printed this story so that I could read it, as I told you I would on my review in your story 'A Starter Boyfriend'. I absolutely loved this story but I think it lacked a little something. I would have enjoyed seeing a few of those conversations they have, but I know sometimes those can be hard to write. Other than that this story was wonderfully written. A total favorite. |
| iPod 2008-06-14 ch 16, | abuseI love you Tatina Moore! (In a writer/reader type of way) YOU ROCK! BUT IF YOU DO NOT WRITE A SEQUEL I WILL BE *VERY UPSET! :) I LOVE YOU! YOU LOVE ME! |
| iPod 2008-06-14 ch 15, | abuseIn the other chapter i said Isaiah was a jerk :D But i was freakin WRONG ~sighh~ Isaiah is like, the DREAM guy I |
| iPod 2008-06-14 ch 9, | abuse*cries* HE IS A JERK! HE CAN GO TO HELL FOR ALL I CARE!! HOW COULD HE SAY THAT ABOUT HER! >:( *stabs Isaiah* DIE JERK DIE! (yesh, i have anger issues ^.^) |
| iPod 2008-06-13 ch 3, | abuseThat dude, Isaiah sounds hot, though I dont really like his name -.- but maybe that's just meh :] |