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Rainpuddle
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuse...

this is the sound of me being blown away...
notated descant.
2007-02-22
ch 1,
abusethe brackets between each main line gives it an undertone of desperation- like you're trying to stay calm, but you're restless and desperate on the inside. Effective! Good job!
Osunale
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abuse"You're just a hitch in my mind control" is a wonderful line - immensely descriptive, and oh-so right.

I see that you've left me plenty of poems to catch up on...I'll get to them all eventually.
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