|Reviews for Awake Inside A Dream|
| felicia13 2/13/07 . chapter 1
'Awake inside a dream' is quite nice. It reminds me of something I wrote ... yeah. I smell a flashback! *flashes back to self* Mm ... good times.
Anywho, it's quite nice and makes me happy in my soul. Nicely written.
| eldrin 2/10/07 . chapter 1
"Awake inside a dream" is lovely. It's interesting how this line follows "into a dreamy countenance." Thpugh the "dreamy" borders on the overdone, I think that I like the relatedness.
| emeraude-irlandais 2/7/07 . chapter 1
I'm a little put off by the use of "dream" or a derivative twice in ten words, but hey, dream is one of those words for which one-word synonyms are impossible. Maybe it's that redundance that makes me see this as a little less inspired than your other pieces. bella
| MsWriter 2/6/07 . chapter 1
I love your word choice.
| no.peace.los.angeles 2/6/07 . chapter 1
Interesting poem! It's one of those very philosophical pieces, with the strange thought of being awake while sleeping. I don't know that I like using "dreamy" as an adjective, though, since you use "dream" at the end. Other than that, nice work. Keep writing! :)
| Frore 2/6/07 . chapter 1
Simple, but elegant! Wonderful word choices.