wow again another powerful emotional piece, very well done.

Cool. Nice job on this. I really like it.

I love the rhyme scheme and the flow to this was great. I think that this poem would make a great song. Awesome work and keep writing.

oh, sounds like a begining of a great song. You can add more to it, and put a good lyric in it as well. Yeah I can so see this as a song. good poem though.