Loving it so far and I wanna see more of the Keira/Jesse relationship though. Please update soon!
Ellie
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I'm quite enjoying this story of yours, and hope you can update soon. I know that updating time is hard to find, and writer's block is killer, but don't let that get you down. You capture emotions perfectly, while still making it humourous to read.

~Happily waiting for the next chapter,
Ruby

LOL.

I was laughing so hard at chapter 2!

I also adore RENT.

and you have a good story going on, even with writer's block...

just think up of more stuff... rather than the emotional moments in corners, something like them head to head with a guard... :D

Love the chapter. Adore the line about Captain Jack Sparrow. Really looking forward towards the next chapter. No matter how long it takes.

I laughed at Jesse earlier in the chapter. I really like how you've done this so far and love how you have your characters. Kepp it up and looking forward to the next chapter.

... Not much to say. Just wanted to let ya know I read this. Good job!

so, i was hoping jesse would be one of the gay ones, but i guess not... oh well.

Ooh, I love it. Update soon, please!

O.o S&M and bondage? kinky. ANYWAYS... You gave a lot of info in the chapter, things make sense now, and Michael's punching of Shawn...sweet. Didn't see it coming. There could have been a bigger reaction to it though. Otherwise, really great. !Mariah

GAH! THE SEXUAL TENSION IS KILLING ME! Very awkward, very real. Keep it up. ~Mariah

I'm guessing Shawn is gay, right? & he likes Michael, & Michael is gay too. Yeah? I don't know, just a wild guess. :D Anyways, great chapter. I loved it as always.

I'm starting to love the Keira character. Great story. Keep it up! I love your stories.

I absolutly love this story. And I can't wait until the next update.

This is so good so far! I love Rent, it's awesome that you have it in your story like this. It's really, really awesome, keep writing!