 LEDlorien7 2007-03-06 . chapter 1I really hate to critiqe poems, it's hard to tell the difference between mistakes and creative usages of the Poets' License, but I think you might mean solitude instead of "solitary" in the beginning. Solitary is an adjective, solitude is the noun.
But i like the poem, it's really deep! |
 MsWriter 2007-02-06 . chapter 1Very nice, but you said it yourself a shawdow isn't easy to break. Who wants to be normal, someone who can easily bend, then something that would never break; not even its soul. I enjoy this poem. Keep up the good work |