I really like this one! It is so simple and sweet!

This is beautiful. I like that subtle rhyme in the last two lines. The words and images that you conjured is fantasy-like. An amazing haiku! *faves*


-C.N

I like the approximate rhyme in the last two lines... beutifully written

This is so pretty, i love the way the words combine and compliment each other, well done hun, this is just amazing!

The imagery that comes from this is so beautiful!!

Lots of love
~AC~

... a glance of hope... yet unfulfilled...

nice...