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| Yourbutt 2007-09-05 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this one! It is so simple and sweet! |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. I like that subtle rhyme in the last two lines. The words and images that you conjured is fantasy-like. An amazing haiku! *faves* -C.N |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like the approximate rhyme in the last two lines... beutifully written |
| AllyCred 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is so pretty, i love the way the words combine and compliment each other, well done hun, this is just amazing! The imagery that comes from this is so beautiful!! Lots of love ~AC~ |
| Basara 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuse... a glance of hope... yet unfulfilled... nice... |