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Evertwilight
Yourbutt
2007-09-05 . chapter 1
I really like this one! It is so simple and sweet!
Chidori Nadare
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. I like that subtle rhyme in the last two lines. The words and images that you conjured is fantasy-like. An amazing haiku! *faves*
-C.N
simpleplan13
2007-03-08 . chapter 1
I like the approximate rhyme in the last two lines... beutifully written
AllyCred
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
This is so pretty, i love the way the words combine and compliment each other, well done hun, this is just amazing!
The imagery that comes from this is so beautiful!!
Lots of love
~AC~
Basara
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
... a glance of hope... yet unfulfilled...
nice...
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