I don't know why I'm drawn to this, but it is well written. Grim but truthful. Well done.

Well done. You don't need to know what's going on/what's happened to enjoy this little ficlet. :3 The subtle philosophical edge does the trick.

this is definitely interesting. if you have andy ideas on how to expand this into a story, go for it. your writing is pretty good and i would be interested in checking back if you expand this.