I understood it (to the other reviews), and you did a spectacular write out of this; it was fluent and encompassing.

...O.o...yes, it is very sick an morbid-though that's not necessarily a bad thing. I love your use of italics in this.

Wow, keep up the great work!

Wow! The surprises keep coming in this one. Nicely done. It was very intriguing, in a twisted sort of way. Good work!

This was a strange poem. Was it about a girl being raped by her father or was it a poem about a girl who cuts herself with a razor?

SirScott

Creepy. 0_o But good.

Rowan.

Wow, creepy. I'm not sure I get it... Has a nice flow. Good work.

Isabella-May