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| Tohru Daihikashousha 2007-04-28 ch 5,  | abuseIris. Definitely Iris. |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-04-22 ch 6, | abuseLiked that part where you went like "keep Dante hanging"... because every time someone tells me to "hang on" over the phone... ma-an, I talk wa-ay too much ! Anyway, that was a really good story... only, I think there were two instances where you've made errors... One was probably in the 4th or so chapter, whenever Dante was there for dinner... his friends called Ethan's godfather 'Shaun' and one 'Shane'... and previously, Ethan had told Dante that his godfther was 'Shawn'... the other one... I can NOT remember... :( |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-04-22 ch 5, | abuseWow, man... that was awkward, and - real NICE ! I mean, I have felt something like that, when my surrogate sister kept on pushing me away... I didn't know why she didn't like me as much as I liked her, and why... well, things, as yet, haven't turned out too great about it, anyway (except that it gave me real satisfaction to have thrown her b'day gift and card in her face, last month :P) But, anyway... one heck of a really cool story... especially, this chap. rules ! |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-04-22 ch 4, | abuseWow ! You really think of *everything*, huh ?? Everytime am asking a question, I am finding it's answer in the very next chapter or something like that !! Shakespeare - wow !! Nyway, this chapter was really nice... good to know that most people aren't homophobes after all !! |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-04-22 ch 3, | abuse...um... wait, SHAKEPEARE ?? Yikes ! |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseSo... there, you've given the URL... thanks, from all the people who wanted it :P |
| wake of beauty 2007-04-10 ch 6, | abuseAww, cute story =D |
| AbbeyEileen 2007-03-21 ch 5, | abuse(Can I vote a second time?) FM, THWL, IDLM, and then Iris. In that order. |
| Momoro 2007-03-21 ch 4, | abusevery cute story! I'm interested to see how it will develop! Are you aware that Caleb's name later changes to Casey...? |
| camikaza 2007-03-21 ch 5, | abuseyow^^ facebook me seems interesting to me! ^^ well...I don't like modays too... anyway, I'll vote for the facebook,'causeI like variation^^ |
| megerdum 2007-03-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseI'd be more interested in reading "I Don't Like Mondays" |
| camikaza 2007-03-16 ch 4, | abuseyay^^ nice chappie!hope you'll update soon, and I'm curious 'bout that story of ethan's family ^^ |
| megerdum 2007-03-16 ch 4, anon. | abuse:D |
| AbbeyEileen 2007-03-15 ch 4, | abuseOoh! Ooh! Band story?? Me, me, me!! (I feel like one of those seagulls/gaviotas in "Finding Nemo". My Spanish class is putting on the play and the gaviotas have this really hilarious dance.) Dante is so adorable!! Eek, and Ethan so shy, aww... |
| -delirious karma 2007-02-18 ch 3, | abuseI love this so far, I read the one-shot from the truth-or-dare game and I loved it. Please continue, will Dante's ex be included in this?? |