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arirang 2008-02-27 ch 6,	abuseRead this through and loved the idea. It's well-written and avoids cliche but still incredibly enjoyable. ^^ As for your questions, I can answer the last one. Definitely Jean-Claude. I'm guessing that if Aidan and Sheridan are soulmates, Charlotte and Jean are soulmates, too? Update soon!
DiaRose 2007-09-21 ch 5,	abuse"But she was in too awkward of a position for her heart strings to send the message, so all she felt was a primitive loathing. " That's my favorite line! I don't know what it is, but I love it. I can tell this piece means a lot to you by the way you write it. It's very wonderful. Love, ~Dia
DiaRose 2007-09-21 ch 3,	abuseOh, getting interesting! I think you told me about that twist before, but I totally forgot about it, and was surprised when I read it anyway! Lol, very nice. And very original of course. Your talents never weaken for a moment, do they? Love, ~Dia
DiaRose 2007-09-19 ch 2,	abuseAgain, beautifully written, and interesting at that. Perfect. And to answer your question from your review reply, I think writers have two hearts, but a Doctor wouldn't be able to find the extra. It's just for writing. You can't tell me you're ever the exact same person after writing something new? Well, someone without a writer's heart might be. Then, you wouldn't know. You are very thoroughly a writer, in heart head and soul. No doubts there. Love, ~Dia.
DiaRose 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abuseThis is so nice. I always meant to read it. I knew it would be good. I'm interested already, and your description is good. It's not dull at all, the words are completely yours; I get afraid with you that you'll simply use the fanciest word, and not the one that your writer's heart tells you to use. But I see you in this. Love, ~Dia.
Mslotr 2007-08-30 ch 5, anon.	abuseI was also going to say that I agree with karynn about the relationships. Otherwise it was great. When the next chapter comes out I'm going to start over reading the story to see how it fits.
Mslotr 2007-08-29 ch 5, anon.	abuseI didn't think you'd update this fast. Hm . . . Nice chapter. I wasn't really able to get into the chapter, though. I'm almost positive that it was because my sister (K) kept interupting me. Lot's of funny parts. I really want to see how this next bit plays out.
Death Walks Alone 2007-08-27 ch 5,	abuseIrritating when they just move in like that, isn't it? Still, it'll give you something to do during school. Just remember not to talk out loud. I laughed out loud at some of the things in the chapter! Which is good, cause I've been in a bad mood today. Very good, can't wait til you get the next one up.
karynn 2007-08-27 ch 5,	abuseI love this story. I really do. LOVE it. SO much. (It's fading_daydream from the NW, by the way.) The one thing I would say is that you've given a lot of confusion and mystery - I'd clear some of it up soon, or people are going to get TOO confused. Also, don't be quite so obvious about the character relationships. A little subtlety never hurt anybody. Not that I don't LOVE it. You know I do.
caffeinatedlackey 2007-08-27 ch 5,	abuseGreat chapter, lots of action and the foundation for a bit of romance. One thing bothered me, though -- “This is America, you know.” I thought they were in Italy? And later on you say "We'll probably have to intercept it on its way to America." Confusing.
Laughing In the Night 2007-08-10 ch 4,	abuseclaps hand over mouth to hold in wild screams of delight I LOVE IT!
QuarantineVirus 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abuseI rather enjoyed this, it has a better feel for it then a lot of the things I have been reading and has a very smooth flow to it. I'm definitely reading the rest of the chapters.
Stellaciel Blue 2007-08-09 ch 4, anon.	abuseI had way too much fun reading this! I didn't know how you were going to continue this story after so long, but this was awesome and I can't wait to read more! P.S. I love Jean-Claude's character! :)
Death Walks Alone 2007-08-08 ch 4,	abuseI like this story! And all of the sudden, I've taken a liking to Jean-Claude. It happened when we were playing that character game, and I suddenly really like him. Strange, but I'll assume good. So, do you plan on having the next chapter up soon?
Songs of an Angel 2007-08-07 ch 4,	abuseLol Nice chapter. Descriptive. Where's is Aidan though?? :(( Heyy...do you mind if I use the name Aidan? ;) I'm really liking the name! Please update soon! Thanks, hun! :)

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