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Kayleigh - clumsybella15
2008-06-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, that girl at school... Let's say it's a message to her. Brilliant poem, love the way you have such short lines. Great last line, "Think about it."

Kayleigh

PS: I managed to get here through Google... I won't explain. You know the story.
Wir1wind0001
2007-03-04
ch 1,
abusei totally agree with this! i know exactly what you are talking about...there's a bunch of beyotches like that at my school too!
Black and White Dreams
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abuseSounds like a few girls I know. I wish I could say all that to them. This is exactly how I feel most of the time about them. Vivid imagery, here. You're brilliant! ^_^

~Black and White Dreams~
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