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| a silenced revolution 2007-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseQuite peaceful. Nicely written, good job. |
| Elenive 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThe train of thought slips in this one. Like something slowly becoming out of focus. I get an overwhelming sense of green when reading this. Very relaxing. |
| nine iron 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuseWow you have been here quite a while like me! I have really enjoyed all the changes bar the introduction of review replies, it has detracted from the etiquette we all used to have of review then be reviewed. RIGHT!! I have been thinking about that all day and I am off 2 write a poem about it!! Keep up the good work and thanks for the review, sorry for the delay, little busy writing this weekend rather than review replies. |
| Midnight In Eden 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is very calm and centering. One little thing, perhaps get rid of your "and"s in the last section. So the words just fall down rather than keep getting and this and this and this. Otherwise, nice work. .:midnight:. |