I love it how your stories are so short, and yet they stir up so much emotion. Great job on this one!

Excellent, you say so much while never really saying anything at all.

Wow. I was just beginning to enjoy the hot chocolate when the cold wind swept in with Mike's departure.

Sudden, but excellent.

Try shooting for ones a bit longer? (hopeful) But, then again, the shortness of it contributes to the fantastic-ness of it. Hmm...

^_^

That was amazing. Sad, but amazing. :3

It's amazing how short a piece could convey such a small, but powerful scene. It's lovely. :) Wish I could do that.