i really ** like this. there's just something so...conclusive about it in that "everything's going to be alright" sort of way. this kind of gives me my own sort of closure.

Aw. I like the gray theme.

Man, I'm running out of different things to say with every time I review. You're just amazing, okay?

It's really cute.

I love that within the shortness that is this drabble, you still maintain characterization and style. That, I think, is what I admire most of this; it is quite short and yet you pack enough detail for it to be expressive. Fantastic.

Although, my only quip is: The last line seems entirly too forced--like it's there to allude to the femmeslash and not nesasarily be there for anything other than to describe her, May, as such.

Don't get me wrong, I do love this piece, but the last line is a tad irksome. :/ Honestly, I think this is really good. Keep it up.

- as beauty dies