wow that was just..wow
i loved it
the last line was a great ender

E!! I remember this! I love this one!

As always, you're amazing!! This is going on my favs, I don't care what people think.

Do you have the one about the couple with supernatural effects from a...explosion was it? Free falling I think it was called. You should post that...if you want.

oh my wow lol

Oh... My... Gods... This was amazing. I mean it. I love this!

Very interesting piece.