loved it alot. i love Jaden and Kieren so which ever one Tayler needs up with i know im ganna be sad but i still love it. Please udate soon cant wait to read more

AH how could you just leave this story!!?? Was it because you were discouraged by the lack of reviews? Because this work is one of your best- it has a plot and substance, more so than some of your other stories. The writing is polished,the characters are interesting, and it has real potential. I hope you get back to this story in the future- FP isn't the most reliable as far as reviews go. While your other stories may have accumulated more reiews, it is because they fall in line with what most FP adolescent readers want: cliched romances with highschool love stories. Not that there is anything wrong with that, especially because your writing is refreshing and I enjoy reading your stories. But don't let that be a determinent of your story's value; that would be a misguided view. Please finish this story, as there are only three estimated chapters left, from what you said. Just do it! Hahah but looking forward to your stories! :)

AH LOOKS SO GOOD SO FAR! why is it on hiatus? :(

Only three more chapters? NO! i was hoping like 50 more chapters! even though i know that is totally impossible and everything but gosh i'm addicted to this story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I really like the way you write, it's edited so there are no perky errors to get in the way of the story and once you start reading- you can't stop! There is something just so enthralling about this story line. Amazing is a good adjetve for it. *_*

This story is fan-freakin-tastic! No doubt about it! He,he ^_^

Gosh. I've only read the first chapter and i'm already hooked! You have just gained a fan ^_^ There almost no mistakes in the text; i'm impressed. Thank you for writing this story!

I love your characters in this one. They are very simple and clean. In a good way. It's not... messy. It's fairly clear where all of them stand. Stories with majorly twisted plots can be fun, but also tiresome. It's nice to read this.

I love Jaden. "What's your favorite color?" Hah. And I love Kieren. He's so... soft, and polite. I expected him to be a fiery, secretive, dark character when I first started reading. I'm happy he's not. I'm also glad that you made it more of a genetic thing, and not a moral thing. I haven't seen that before (though I haven't delved very deeply into the world of vampire romances). He deserves somebody to love, but that would be ultra complicated.

My favorite would probably have to be Chris. He is the most dynamic of any of the characters. Ha, if Tara really got involved, then you'd have bost the brother's best friend and the best friend's brother.

As far as (hopefully constructive - I'm trying) criticism goes, I simply think that the story isn't fulfilling its potential. It could be longer. It would be cool to see Tayler accompany Chris and Jaden on their trips. We don't see her in action much.
It would also be nice to see them actually kill a vampire (besides David if they kill him in the end). Basically, I think the plot could be extended. Also, we don't quite see how Jaden and Tayler fell for each other. It was briefly explained, but it would be nice to see it happen, or see a larger part of it or whatever.

I'm excited to see what's going to happen in the end. Definitely looking forward to the rest of it!

Aw it's coming to an end. I'm glad Kieren nots dead. I was worried you might have staked him or something.lol All right, I'm going to kick Chris's ass for beating up Kieren! lol Though i know by saying this I'm getting closer to the end I'm going to say it anyways: Keep posting. It's been another great chapter.

GAWD! You must update, like, now! Please! I seriously, when I first started reading, wanted her to end up with Kieren, but then like halfway through, I was like if she ends up with him I'll absolutely die. Usually I like stories where the vampire and girl end up together, but not in this one. Jaden is perfect for her. I can't wait to read more, I love this story so much, I just wish I could have found it sooner.

You should have so many more reviews than this, its horrible. I know what you mean though, on my other account I run into the same trouble. You have a lot of hits, but no one reviews. I don't get it, but whatever. Update soon ok? Kudos! See ya!

Only three more chapters how is that possible?
Would love for this to turn into an epic, but I guess I'll have to make do. Love love love it.

it is still a mystery to me. i mean, i get the flow but i am still in the curious stage. but still, i do like your characters.

oh snap.
i wanna read more :)
update update! whats kieren? and what does David want with her and chris?? Wierd. does he know them?
and whats gonna happen with Jaden?? UPDATE! :D haha

haha, i live in the twin cities :)

ahh. i love your story. its addicting. =D please update soon.

I really enjoyed this story. can't wait for more. It's cute and sexy all at the same time.
props to you!