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Reviews For: The Dragon

hateandkill-D
2008-06-12
ch 1,
abusethis is absolutley amazing! I would love to be able to write things of such beauty as this. wonderful job.
Jesse the Storyteller
2007-12-20
ch 1,
abuseI liked the phrases "hesitant soul" and "your falling, feeble eyes of firelight" ... the word "detestation" seems a little forced and out of place, and again the rhyming makes the poem seem a little cheesy.

-Jesse
Dante's Disciple
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely written, I seen a double meaning here, like the words don't really have to refer to a dragon at all...
Evenunderscore
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuselisten, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours.
A.R. Mouse
2007-02-08
ch 1,
abuseOh, I like it a lot...I mean, it's about dragons! How could it not be cool! But ayh, your dictions really nice and the flow of the poem! Keep Writing!

~Words from the Heart~ A.R. Connelly
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