this is absolutley amazing! I would love to be able to write things of such beauty as this. wonderful job.

I liked the phrases "hesitant soul" and "your falling, feeble eyes of firelight" ... the word "detestation" seems a little forced and out of place, and again the rhyming makes the poem seem a little cheesy.

-Jesse

Very nicely written, I seen a double meaning here, like the words don't really have to refer to a dragon at all...

listen, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours.

Oh, I like it a lot...I mean, it's about dragons! How could it not be cool! But ayh, your dictions really nice and the flow of the poem! Keep Writing!

~Words from the Heart~ A.R. Connelly