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| hateandkill-D 2008-06-12 ch 1,  | abusethis is absolutley amazing! I would love to be able to write things of such beauty as this. wonderful job. |
| Jesse the Storyteller 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI liked the phrases "hesitant soul" and "your falling, feeble eyes of firelight" ... the word "detestation" seems a little forced and out of place, and again the rhyming makes the poem seem a little cheesy. -Jesse |
| Dante's Disciple 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written, I seen a double meaning here, like the words don't really have to refer to a dragon at all... |
| Evenunderscore 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuselisten, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours. |
| A.R. Mouse 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like it a lot...I mean, it's about dragons! How could it not be cool! But ayh, your dictions really nice and the flow of the poem! Keep Writing! ~Words from the Heart~ A.R. Connelly |