Spot on, I think. I'm currently reading that series (I'm almost finished with "Silver Chair"). Aslan is quite an enigmatic character, isn't he? Sort of like God, imagine that.

I love the vocabulary of this and the poem flowed beautifully. Fantasic job.

Beautiful. You know how to find the right words, and how to use them. The poem would be very meaningful even without the Narnia connection.

I liked this poem, but the rhyming seems really cheesy. It would have been better without the rhyming.

-Jesse

Beautiful poem here. The words flowed well and so did the rhyming.

And it was based on a totally awesome character.

Keep writing!

Wow I read the tales of Narnia a long time ago. *nostalgia* This poem inspired to read them again. I really enjoyed the line with mirth in it. Thanks for writing this, it really inspired me!

Surreal

Wow that is totally amazing! It kind of makes me sad, because it reminds me of the bit of the book (and the film) where you see Aslan's eyes just before they kill him. I take it that was inspiration?

Anyway, I think your poems are really thougthful - aswell as thought provoking.

Ladybird

You know you probably didn't even read my review because I said I liked your poem. Anyway, I will erase all of my reviews of your stuff if you erase the crap that you wrote on mine.

At first glance, it didn't seem to be much of a poem, but after thinking about it, the beauty of it just exploded in my face (sorry, that sounded horrible... but it's true, metaphorically speaking). Good poem. I love Narnia.

hey its been quite awhile
so for not responding to the forums and stuff for so long, things have been crazy.
anyways, i don't really know much about the chronicles of narnia, but this is beautiful...just like you :D
and the rhyming is like perfect.seriously.

Wonderful. It's fabulous when people really understand those stories. Wonderful wonderful.