Excellent work! ^_^

WOW!
That was great!
You have a really interesting plot there.
Is there going to be a sequal?
Anyways, great job!

Hmm... a sci-fi one! Nice... very nice lol... seriously ur briliant! I would have liked to read a bit more romance... but u still ended it in a good place...

Dahgen has Spark wrapped around is little finger, but Spark seems to enjoy pretending he's hates him.

Awesome! Write more! aka Sequel Please!

I swear to god you are possibly the only person out there who can write sci fi/romance I'd actually read. Its definitely not my usual cup of tea but when you are writing I simply cant stay away. I'm wondering do you just have a flavor for mechanics and how things work or is this all straight off the top of your head? Quite impressive as always and as I always promise I'll be back to read more another day.

~Centi

I really enjoyed this! I wish there was more 'cause I really like Spark and Dahgen together.

now this should be continued.

I love this story ^_^ The ending is just so awesomely cute! I hope you write more soon :D

Lol, this is excellent. I hope you make a sequel to this, very amusing. I'm surprised that you only have two reviews. Well I hope to read more from you soon.

Eh, you haven't forgotten about that spin-off about H'ranli, have you? I like this one of all your gremlin fics--it has the most details on how they actually use their tech-magic.

Great story.
Somehow, about an eighth of the way in, I KNEW one was gonna end up kissing the other. I like this story. Make it longer?