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| Twin Eclipse 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abusee that was so aweswome! lovely! |
| Awe 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abusevery much enjoyed reading this, especially the part where Inkiza took initiative and made the first move. That he was the one who did that made me happy. The only thing that confused me a bit in the story was how much time passed, how, and when. I had trouble catching the time-skips as they were just sentences and did not differ from any other part of the story. Thank you for sharing the story. |
| b 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusethe only thing that bothered me was the confusion with the time change from when inkiza was denied the throne and the barbarian invasion (i think there might have been a separation there, but it's now missing). other than that... OH MY GOD. SO SEXY. i love how inkiza went from timid prince to really really carnal hot. i'm fanning myself. |
| nomy 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseim lovin it! hahaha..the story are so cool..the way you make it end.but im confuse..o_O because Ebedi is a barbarian so they supposed to be a king in the barbarian clan is it? so is it Ebedi the king or Ebedi is descendants of the king..cause im a little a bit confuse on that part on why can he conquer kingdom.. |
| Centi the Yaoi Hime 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuse*squeals and rolls around* A bit on the bloody side but very much enjoyable. Bravo and once more thank you thank you thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination with the rest of us! |
| FanoraJane 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abusewow...just, wow. you are amazing! this story is going straight to favorites. |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseaw! sweet. tad terrifying. but sweet none the less! |
| liveparandra 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseThis one REALLY got me. I was crying like the sad sap I am when Ebedi got taken away. I'm the type to really be taken away--transported into well written stories. And the utter destruction Inkiza would have felt right then would have been to much for me to bare. I notice you have a liking for really strange names xD. Don't get me wrong, I love em, but it's like you're throwing darts at letters and putting them into a name. xD I love it! |
| Pirate'sBlackWolfs 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseilikeitilikeitilikeit! lol. sorry. veryvery nice. if i could write like this, i'd be in heavan. its a very good story(though u've probably gathered my opinion on that from my first comments) |
| D. Empress 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWait, wait, WAIT! Why isn't the rest of this in your livejournal? I remember up til the Uncle tears Ebedi away and that's it! Yay! You finally got an fp account! |
| AquaCherry 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI'm in love with Ebedi and Inkiza. Especially Inkiza. He's absolutely adorable (for lack of a better word). |
| Cel M. 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseAh, my lord, I think this one is my favorite...no, their all my favorite! MUWHA! :favorites: =] |
| Chasmodai Blue 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseOoh! It was good and all that jazz. And such a...not horrible ending. Kudos and keep up the good work. |
| Lady Psychic 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is yet another wonderful story that you have written. Keep up the good work! |