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| deuteriuM Xtreme 2008-04-27 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so cute and sweet. Ruari especially. ^^ And I like all the diction and the -purpose- of the characters in the story apart from being plain prose candy. But I thought Ruari's "You're crazy" somewhere in the beginning sounded just a -bit- too modern... But I'm just nitpicking. Good job! :D |
| PoertyQueen 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this story it was good. It was so amazing actually! |
| Serolina 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseThis story is so cute and funny, i love it! XD so cute~! |
| Centi the Yaoi Hime 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseHonestly judging by the fact that this is just your archive for your stories I half wonder if you read what I write each time. But in the case you do I must say this is my favorite of your stories thus far. The characters personalities are well shaped and attractive, and your writing form is very poetic. I'm particularly fond of the vocabulary in this work and your vivid paintings of the characters inner selves. Thank you as always for sharing your talent for soppy mooks like me who love fluff. |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseaw! *sits and stared in awe at the awness. (ha. so much AW)* Tis adorabubble. j'ai adore. i'm failing french, i TRIED to say I love it. i reckon i failed. |
| Imagined Insanity 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis. Story. Is. AWESOME. great writing. |
| liveparandra 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseMore love. I have to do my part to help cure this horrible lack of review flu going around xD I simply adore Kain and Ruari--Kain especially. Mosly because I'd love a guy with that kind of confidence. (And an desire to touch hair, because petting heads is fun) Though I do see a lot of the same kind of characters in your stories. In retrospect, I do see small differences between them all, which is good. But I would love to see you experiment with different types. Maybe people that aren't so familier with their sexuality or personalities that are so opposite that they just wouldn't work (but of course we know they will) :DD I'd love to see this continued. See Kain and Ruari be comfy together and maybe see Kain's ruling land together? |
| Lady Leing 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI'm totally faving this. *3* Very veerry cute and sweet story!! I love the twist at the end!! XD Hehe. And I love how you write O.o |
| CocoKate 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abuseDo you have any idea how much I love you? I mean as a writer, not as a person. I really don't know you as a person, sorry. I am sure I would love you, anyway, because I love your stories so gosh darn much. I love the type of story you write, and I love the way you write them. Thank you for letting such wonder burst into the world from your magnificent brain! |
| Amindaya 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was cute. |
| write-this-down 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was really sweet. I liked it a lot. I think I'll go read some more of your stuff...*whisks away* |
| Cel M. 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was totally lovely and amusing. Goshdamn, I loved it, haha. :favorites: =] |
| Drarry Radton 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseVery, very nice and interesting story. Love Kian. Update as soon as possible. |
| xanthofile 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abusethis was rather sweet, and sometimes those are the best sorts of reads. funny that i adore this style of writing even though i can't actually reproduce it. hm. thanks for allowing me the pleasure of reading it! |
| Lady Psychic 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseAll of your stories that I've read so far are well written and enjoyable. That fact is also true about this one. I also liked the twist at the end of this story. |