i love ur story and hope u finish it...i also like redhead lol

I LOVE THIS STORY!

The concept for this -- and the outcome -- is just amazing! I've never read anything based on a nursey rhyme! Usually, most things are based on popular fairytales and some instances of history, but...this is just perfect. :D It's very well written and the characters are interesting. ^^

Ah dor a ble! Hehe very cute! u seem to like hiding what ur characters really are... and they always turn out to be roylty! lol still lovely!

Wow, this was amazing, so well written and I enjoyed that ending. I am always impressed when an author can say so much with so few words. You make me want to hear the rest of their story.

Quite entertaining. I love how the dynamic of all four of them. How much of a shock will all the respect and attention be for Ruari once he's in Laidir? Brigid and Quin won't have anything to do but make little heirs.

Aw, I love this! So well written. And it wasn't boring at all. A little cliche, but wonderful. There were surprises until the end! Great job!

Aww.. It's so sweet, I love it! if you ever write more on this, I will definitly read it!
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awesome story! luved the plot twist at the end!

That was so cute and sweet. Ruari especially. ^^ And I like all the diction and the -purpose- of the characters in the story apart from being plain prose candy. But I thought Ruari's "You're crazy" somewhere in the beginning sounded just a -bit- too modern... But I'm just nitpicking.

Good job! :D

I really liked this story it was good. It was so amazing actually!

This story is so cute and funny, i love it! XD so cute~!

Honestly judging by the fact that this is just your archive for your stories I half wonder if you read what I write each time. But in the case you do I must say this is my favorite of your stories thus far. The characters personalities are well shaped and attractive, and your writing form is very poetic. I'm particularly fond of the vocabulary in this work and your vivid paintings of the characters inner selves. Thank you as always for sharing your talent for soppy mooks like me who love fluff.

aw!
*sits and stared in awe at the awness. (ha. so much AW)*
Tis adorabubble.
j'ai adore.
i'm failing french,
i TRIED to say I love it. i reckon i failed.

This. Story. Is. AWESOME.

great writing.