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Reviews For: I Weep When You Do Not

bahaghari
2007-08-28
ch 2, anon.
abusei liked the last line... so human--capable of selfishness (to forgive) although we are aware of hoe God loves us.
Basara
2007-02-09
ch 1,
abusehm... both interrelated haikus...

a reflection in one's cruelty indeed...

nice...
Tragic Bliss
2007-02-08
ch 2,
abuseI like these haikus. Very straight forward, as most haikus are. But, my favorite has to be the second one. It has always struck me how Jesus was so forgiving, and how we are not. interesting.
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