Absolutely beautiful. I love your portrayal of the Goddess in this.

Is this an historical poem? Some of the lines didn't really make a lot of sense for the twenty-first century (where a woman is only as good as her husband/ where to have no man is seen as naive). It was well-written though, and it reminded me a lot of a prayer to Artemis I have in my BoS.

I wouldn't worry about putting it in the religion section - it's about a goddess, therefore it's spiritual (and they don't have a spiritual section for poetry) - pagan pride!

Kate
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