 McQuinn 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Freaky, freaky, freaky. Kind of reminded me of Poe. I knew he was insane, but I'm so confused about his hallucinations--can I call it that? Anyway, I'm wondering about the prick in his side. Maybe it's some sort of sedative they've given him at the asylum or something. The violin...hm, who knows what that is? Maybe they're playing some sort of calming music in the asylum, and since he's been there so long, the repetition of it makes him even more crazy. The woman? I imagine her to be a nurse. The little creature and cat? I have noo clue.
Heh, anyway, fabulous writing. Short and simple, and great descriptions that help readers understand how your character is feeling. I really look forward to reading more of your work.
-McQuinn |