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| AKlimesh 2008-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseI like it! You're really good at writing summaries too, it really got my attention! |
| McQuinn 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseFreaky, freaky, freaky. Kind of reminded me of Poe. I knew he was insane, but I'm so confused about his hallucinations--can I call it that? Anyway, I'm wondering about the prick in his side. Maybe it's some sort of sedative they've given him at the asylum or something. The violin...hm, who knows what that is? Maybe they're playing some sort of calming music in the asylum, and since he's been there so long, the repetition of it makes him even more crazy. The woman? I imagine her to be a nurse. The little creature and cat? I have noo clue. Heh, anyway, fabulous writing. Short and simple, and great descriptions that help readers understand how your character is feeling. I really look forward to reading more of your work. -McQuinn |
| Written 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abusewhoa, very interesting. do write out what really happened. I think that would be cool to read too. I really felt in his head as I read it. awesome work. |
| Frore 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, crazy! Great sensory details - I definitely felt like I was inside the mind of a lunatic, which is in this case, a good thing... Keep writing! |
| Winter's Light 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseSounds very psychological. I found it to be very interesting ('cause I love that stuff) and I'd love it so much if you would write what really happened. I'm still a little confused on it. xP |