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| ShadowFane 2007-08-24 ch 5,  | abuseDON'T MAKE HIM HAVE TO LEAVE THE WOMAN! AHH! Why is it in every really good story the man and the woman are apart?...Oh...That's why...Lol. I love this story. You're gonna continue soon, right?...Please? SF |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-08-22 ch 5, | abuseAww.. Cute love story so far... That's a sweet letter too.. Very romantic type guy huh? Well written, keep it up. ~Rhea |
| ShadowFane 2007-06-28 ch 4, | abuseDarling, I don't care what you do with it, just continue! Lol. Love your stories. Keep it up! SF |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-06-17 ch 4, | abuseAw!! Cuteness! I love it. You're a good writer. He's quite the romantic so far huh? Love it. Keep up the good work. You're a good writer! ~Rhea P.S.- In a typical story, lol.. This would be continued with some sort of bad event happening... But we'll see. |
| Can't Fight The Moonlight 2007-04-09 ch 3, | abuseCute! Lovely story. I'm not real sure I believe in love, but you know. Words from a woman scorned, eh? Well. Truly hope you continue this. I'm not fond of war, but this looks good. CFTM |
| ShadowFane 2007-04-03 ch 3, | abuseAww! I stand by what I've said a million times. Love is a beautiful thing...When it's true. Anyway, love the chapter. You flipping rock! :) Update soon! SF |
| ShadowFane 2007-04-03 ch 2, | abuseAww. Sweet! Love is such a beautiful thing...On to the next chapter! SF |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-03-30 ch 3, | abuseAww! Cute! ... They are so totally in love.. My goodness. You're a good writer. Very creative. I like the sound of the flowers and wow... I wish I had a horse like that!!.. Continue soon! ~R.G. ~P.S. - please? |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-03-28 ch 2, | abuse...Dang... 150 miles is kinda a long way. Nicely written. Been a while since you've done much. Glad to see your back! Keep up the good work! ~R.G. P.S. - the ending was really cute... |
| ShadowFane 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuseWow. You know, I'm not usually fond of war stories, but this looks really good. You have to continue it soon!...Please? :) SF |
| Bandits Sonado 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseVery original, I like it lots so far. I found 7 or 8 typos... Oopz... Guess that's what happens when your not looking at the keyboard to type... I like the story so far, please continue!! ~R.G. |
| Black Feather Quill 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseSounding good so far. Only thing is you kinda need to make a new line when someone else is talking and not make it one paragraph example of what I'm saying: "Kayton? Are you okay, son?" she said. "Nightmare," Kayton replied. She sighed, shooed the boy away, and sat at the foot of Kayton's bed. Peeps will get confuddled if this hath no take place. Just a little constructive criticism. Anyways, good start! BFQ |