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| fatbird33 2008-07-19 ch 1,  | abusehmm...almost makes you wonder... i liked the hamper bit |
| fairyfiredust 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abusehaha, very funny! i always have a feeling when i go into a room like i've just missed something, and now i know what! i hate to think what the furniture in my room is like, given the amount of posters i have. and showing snobbish actors too! poor hamper, dirty socks have to be the worst! i wonder who has the worst job between a hamper, washing machine and a dish washer? tough choice! well written, good spacing, grammer, spelling... good story! btw, found this through it being favourited by brothr andyn. just so you know where readers are coming from (or me at least!) |
| Miriam Doyle 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseLolness. When I was younger, I used to look through my room keyhole to see if any of my toys or furniture started moving or talked, and this story reminded me of that. One thing that got on my nerve; you have to end speech with a comma or full stop, for example, "Agreed" everything said should be "Agreed," everything said. Apart from that, this story was a pleasure to read. |
| Brother Andyn 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseLOL I found this pretty funny! Good work. |
| B. K. Siver 2007-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very funny and original story! I never would have wondered what my room was thinking... now I'll have to be much, much nicer to my room. |
| MikaelaBanes 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely brilliant. I've sometimes wondered what they must think when I leave the room XD. But seriously this was brilliant. Really caught my attention. Going to my favs!! :) |
| StarGirl5000 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuselol! That was great! So fun. |
| MaryAuksi 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseHey! This was fun to read :) Good job |
| Emo-mom 2007-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm impressed! Keep up the good work. |
| SuperTD 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved the story, really well written! |
| TerranWarrior 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseLol..ultimate weirdness...but kinda cool. Thought it deserved a review, anyway! Have a Nice Life! |