awesome!! Love it so far! Please do continue!

Oh I love it! Write more soon, I want to know what happens next!

Ugh. What a warped prince. keeping sea nymphs as lovers?? ew. i much rather prefer the relationship of nathan and his little mermaid. :)

wow this is really interesting. i want to find out more.

you write fantastically. was stuck to my com screen reading your stuff. like how you describe mermaids. no disney stuff there haha. i also like nathan, though its weird for someone educated to become a pirate. probably will hear the story later? hmm

I just want to say I love your writing. This is the best version of The Little Mermaid I've read so far! The attention to detail you give your writing is magnificent. I look forward to what happens next in the story :)

I love all your stories, but I think this one might be my favorite. Then again The Little Mermaid has always been my favorite childhood story. Thanks so much for writing this, it's so descriptive and different than any version I have read/seen. Keep up the good work! ^_^

Ok, I love this story. And I love your writing. I have not stopped reading this since I first started - and I have a short attention span! Pirates, mermaids, princes, monsters, love, blood, and imminent danger - and even a Jamaican accent! This story has everything. It is a rare jewel - please, please update soon! Much regard for your talent and efforts.

- Aranel

I figured that it was Bliss who had saved Thaddeus...and now he finds Treasure - WOW! This is getting even better.

I loved it! It was realistic and very romantic - not a bunch of mush. I hope that this isn't a tragedy :(

I so want to know about Ellister!

The plot thickens! Excellent writing, it just carries you along with it. This is going into my faves.

This would make such a great movie, though it's all ready like one in my head - your descriptive style is a treat.

Wow! A truly original and engrossing story! Only the first chapter and I'm totally hooked. Which is surprising considering that i don't usually get into horror stories, but this has more depth to it than just gore. Though there is gore a'plenty! I look forward to what you do with these characters.

Absolutely fantastic. I absolutely adore your stories. I take pride in my writing, but even i feel as if I cannot compare to your genius. Amazing. I really admire you. I eagerly await the next chapter!