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| Anglachele 2008-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseVery sad but I like the angels tears/rain symbolism. Nice flow from the betrayed relationship to the spiritual pain that follows. |
| Godsgirl91 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseHi SaySay, I loved it! Very good! Love ya, LeeLee |
| simpleplan13 2007-03-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. its beautifully described, but one thing bothered me... the back when doesn't really make sense with now... I might make the first back when I a back then... but thats just my opinon |