Oh...My...Gawd! *also gets said familier grin* ..Oh...My...Gawd! >)

~Storm

"Even though he died from blood loss on that night, I saw Ben Harper on the subway platform on the way home from work.

And he had a familiar grin on his face."

Wow. That sentence realyy gave me the creeps. This was really great. Really.

*Applauds happily* I don't think I'll ever get over the ending to that fic. Bravisimo, il mio amico! XD


... okay... I absolutely HAVE to ask...
"...the full name of the character was originally Dawley Brianson. At first he was part of S.A.R.S. (don't ask. seriously, just don't)"
*evil grin* I think you know the Question... Please explain.XDXD

This is an excellent read. A few mistakes like 'of' instead of 'off', I would suggest another proof read but this is one of the best shorts I've read in a long time. Great!

this is a great story. the levels of suspense in it made me unable to stop reading!

really well written.