Good idea but think about creating a beginning, introducting the character, and develop a plot. You sound like a very imaginative person, and curious to find out more about this character you've created. How did they meet? :)

This is a good story although I don't really like the format it's written in, sounds like she's talking to herself...but I love the characters and the events that have taken place it's a good story please continue

this story is great. keep up the good work.

Love your story!

I want to thank you for reading my story and I love you're story.