I think this poem does a good job of capturing the emotions one feels when going through finding out that what you thought was true was really a lie. I should know since I went through the exact same thing.

it was good. I like it. now i'm going to read ur other poems if you have any more. ur poem has alot of pain in it. I hope you feel better about yourself.

i love this poem. i sometimes feel this way but i know that at the end no man diserves a girls tears cuz they wont care. keep writing cuz ur really good though, dont let nothing put you down like that.

The repetition works well because it centralizes the emotions, and makes them all the more relatable. The feelings come across powerfully. Well written.