This is an outstanding chase scene, though I was a little confused about what happened at the end with Robin and the twenty-six years later.

It was thoroughly creepy and had great suspense. I liked the description of how it felt to be tearing through the woods. Speaking as one who's done a lot of that ... it's not pleasant.

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It has a good start. It was definitely a strange little piece, and I enjoyed it.