|Reviews for Just A Dreamer|
| CrazyTurtles 2/12/07 . chapter 1
I so agree! I love it :D
| she smolders 2/11/07 . chapter 1
How true and yet still hard to accomplish.
| Basara 2/11/07 . chapter 1
true... oh soo true... I believe, these people are the "what happened?" ones...
| candy girl 2/9/07 . chapter 1
true! keep up the truthful poetry.
| a silenced revolution 2/9/07 . chapter 1
Quite true. Reminds me of the quote "The world needs dreamers and the world needs doers, but most of all, the world needs dreamers who do."
Anyways, I'll tell you what you probably already know, which is that the syllables are off for a haiku. But I like it.
| Ashelin 2/9/07 . chapter 1
Short, sweet, and to the point. That is true, you should go for your dreams, and then you can make them a reality. Great job.
| Wylloa 2/9/07 . chapter 1
not in traditional Haiku form, but a beautiful work none the less.
| fairytale failure 2/9/07 . chapter 1
Simple, but touching and thoughtful. From a reader's perspective, I would suggest you take out the word 'just' in the first line. This would give you the right number of syllables for a haiku in the first line, and the reader would not realize a dreamer is something to improve on until the third line.
| Which Mistake am I 2/9/07 . chapter 1
haha this so me sadly...but i love it!