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| Guardrail 2007-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this a lot, this a great sensory piece. The detail and imagry is stunning. It's like I was really there exeriencing it. Awesome work, this is great. Keep writing. |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseCool ending. Your descriptive writing style is very entertaining, the way you blend the imagery together is good; I could almost feel the massage. Nicely written. Alan. |