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Besame 2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Aww, this was cute. :) I like your writing style, Amelia and Michael are a cute couple.
lauren 2009-06-10 . chapter 1
i love this
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-11-01 . chapter 1
That was so cute!! I loved that one shot...great job. :)
Green Eyed Angel 2008-11-01 . chapter 1
Ha, cute. I really liked it. Though the whole birthday thing scene should have been longer.
dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-06-11 . chapter 1
aw that is so sweet...at least he finally figure it out though..lol..i loved it...its very good..nice one shot gurl...bye..bye...
Delayed Flight 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
Aww, I love this! I really liked that she wasn't bitter with him, I mean, I would be if he had told me he hated me an all that, lol.
This was really good!!
x3life 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
aw this was soo cutee!! =)
Lily Llynn 2008-02-08 . chapter 1
Cute. A little bit too fluffy, but hey, we all love fluff. (: Pretty well-written, though beginning was a little confusing. Definitely a good oneshot, which I'm adding to my c2 now. (:
LiL PiNk 9o 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
very good
i liked it
ihrtbks 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
Cute...even when she was little, she wanted to be Mrs. Grossi. You made the guy lovesick instead of the girl, not that the girl wasn't. It's refresingly interesting when the guy's got a crush.

GREAT JOB!
candii-apple 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
aw...so sweet...
wolf parade 2007-05-18 . chapter 1
Hey, so I liked it, the fact that although she had between in love with him since she was tiny and in the end he fell for her two. There's one mistake though, where he is walking into the room, it says he always makes a foul of himself, fool? maybe?

Anyway, I hate correcting too much without complimenting enough, so it was GOOD. Ignore other reviews that tell you otherwise.

Love, me
Ruh 2007-05-17 . chapter 1
this is such a cute piece...i love it love it love it
TwinkleHeart 2007-05-17 . chapter 1
AW
RestlessOne 2007-05-17 . chapter 1
I love the story line. Keep going plz! Can not wait for more..
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