This is really good. Just out of curiosity whos and wich poem did u read before you wrote this?

aw...depressing...but well written.

i like this one update it soon please btw u should soon thought its been a while. still in science

bye

Nice bit of work you have. Though I do have a bit of a problem with 'They walk right past you, looking to others that they shout words of praise and joyful laughter reaches back to you.'

Personally, I think that you could have written 'laugher that reaches back to you' but that's just me.

Overall, I liked it with its slightly detached, sad tone with its bittersweet end.

Wow...

You really don't like being the youngest...

Gah, I don't know what to say...This just makes me feel sad..._

Ron