I loved it! Although I found it a bit difficult to understand at first 'cause I was too stupid to look at the author's note at the beginning... I love finding a piece of work that isn't cheerful, that is reality, not fiction. Reality isn't always cheerful, in fact, it's barely ever cheerful. Well... maybe sometimes... You know what I mean. Once again, I loved it! I'm definately going to read some more of your work.

great poem, loved the diction and imagery