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Glassed Rose 2007-02-10 . chapter 1
This is good! My favorite lines were:

"I once felt the wind
blowing through the trees.
I once felt the wind
push me to my knees."
I liked the repitition, it works nicely.
The Un-great-ful 2007-02-10 . chapter 1
I almost didn't bother reading this, normally I find such repetition in poetry to be the sign of a poor piece of writing, but I think you did a good job.

It was nice to read, well balanced and filled with good words and strong content.

Keep writing,

Alan.
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