Great story! I loved Kadora! He was so awesome!

Nice story. I'm just beginning one so check it out sometime. Continue soon.

IM SO SORRY IM JUST REVIEW'N AND THIS CHAP'S BEEN UP FOR A WHILE NOW ... anyways, this chap was good and confuse'n but i loved it! so, Cyn was behind it all? that's wack ... and yay! Ryuu and Kyattsuai are back!! not they just gotta get out of that place ... and whats gonna happen with Tsubasa and Tamai and Sensei, and Rai, and Tenka, and Rin? dang, it's alot go'n on. well, UPDATE SOON!!~ ^_^

I'm still rather new to FictionPress, but I ran across this story. I started reading... and I didn't want to stop. On top of that, I absolutely adore your writing style! It. is. amazing.

The begining was a little confusing, but once I got a grasp on the characters, I fell in love with it. I'm very eager for the next chapter.

I had to read quite a bit to catch up but it was very good. I await your next chapter!

yay! u updated!!~ i'm glad they all used their elements, i kind'a 4got about those too! and yay! i know who that person is who came, it's Tenka, isn't it? Ryuu is so close to find'n Kyatt!! i hope he finds him, and then return to the others with him! so, UPDATE SOON!!~ ^_^

i read this chap earlier a few days ago, but my computer was be'n stupid and wou;dn't let me review, so i don't remember what to write. but i hope Tsubasa and the others get rid of the guys fight'n them!! and i hope Kyat-chan can get outta the mess he's in!! Tenka needs to hurry up though, and so does Ryuu!! they need to speed it up, so they can help out the others!! whatev, love the story!! UPDATE SOON!!~ ^_^

It's nice to see an update on this story again. I've not seen any new chapters in quite a while. This was was very good, even though there was a lot of dialouge but it wasn't enough to turn my away.

Good job!

OWMYGAWSH! Vex, he's like the smexyst guy evur! And I pictured his collar on his monster, Dante. Ja, the best. Oh and there was this one sentence,'Uh, if I may ask a question' Yeah, that was worded wierd to me at first. It's gramaticly correct but I feel like there's something missing, or it could be my overlyweirdness that is just screwing witt your book. Ja bitte. Oh and Hai's and Jak's powers are really similar, witt da changing of the scenes and statues and all. I toatally expected them to be way different, so, yeah. So um see ya tommorow and such, ciao. :D

This was definitely an interesting chapter. I feel a little sorry for poor Cain at the end though.

I wonder what will happen next...

Keep up the good work!

What? ... Wait ... I'm confused ... the last 2 parts are about Kyattsuai right? and does this mean that since Tenka is work'n with the Alliance, he'll be fight'n against Rin, Rai, Tsubabsa, Tamai, and the others? Tenka better go to Terra and forget about Thorn since Rin isn't there anymore!! And what's gonna happen to Kyattsuai? is he a flower like i guess ... was Rin (the girl one, from the past) a flower? im confused ... but i still loved the chap and this story!! well, UPDATE SOON!!~~ ^_^

What a beautifully told chapter. Marvelous job!

...i'm confused. i loved the chap and all and im glad u finally updated, but im confused. i know the ppl talk'n were Kyatt, Tsubasa, and Ryuu, but im confused about whats go'n on. will Ryuu meet up with Tsubasa or Kyatt, or get his memories back? where is Kyatt now? whats gonna happen with Tsubasa and the others? i guess it'll be told soon. well, UPDATE SOON ^_^

Aother wonderful chapter. I wish I actually had something to say intead of leaving a review like this,but I feel I must leave something here. I'll wait for the next chapter.

i need to see the next chap! they finally met up!! all we need is for Kyatt and Ryuu to meet up, then they all finally bump into each other some way! and every1 will be happy!! i can't wait to see what'll happen next! UPDATE SON! ^_^