wow. this was so sad. but tragically beautiful. i really really like

I like this story, I hope you update soon. Could do for being a little bit longer, but it's pretty good. Keep writing.

The beginning is sort of straying from the topic. But I have to question the rating, I'm not so sure about this too, but not all 9yr olds are used to the f word and some don't know about it. I hope there's more, it sounds like you shortened alot of it.