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ticktockman 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abusethe picture is painted beautifully. it tru;y gives a feel for what a crow is.
IdeasInTheAir 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseI kind of got some "Edgar Allen Poe" from that, it seemed to me a bit like his style. This is a really excellent poem, it has wonderful imagery and your descriptions are marvelous. Well done, as always! ~Danielle=)
Take the Money and Run 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseThis poem is really, really cool! I love the lines "meet the blind and be the Eye/and call the hollowed ones to die!" The rhythm is outstanding.
Gangrene 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseAmazing imagery. Reads almost like a song in some ways.
Midnight In Eden 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseI have to admit, the four exclamation marks in the first stanza did make me giggle. That's, unfortunately, all they do for me these days because they are so overused and emphatic! at the same time. Even just one would be much better. Also, do you mean "your" on L4 of the second stanza? Otherwise, it doesn't quite make sense grammatically. Also, what about making the last four lines two instead a la: Enders of storms, Beginners of snow, Carriers of sounds, Birds of woe. Just an idea but the shorter lines do detract from the rhythm of this piece a bit. Overall though this is a solid piece with some good imagery. I just would love you to get rid of those exclamation marks. Midnight
Guardrail 2007-02-11 ch 1,	abuseI really love this piece. The flow of this and the rhyme scheme are great, and the imagry is beautifully written. I especially loved the lines, "Shades, dark shades upon the snow, What are these shades upon the sun?". Great work with this, keep writing.
Gaki Toki 2007-02-10 ch 1,	abuseI...I don't know what to say. I always think of my Jason, my character as a raven or a crow and this is just so...so perfect, definitely one of my favorites now. Very well written, very...I don't know, I just know I loved it.

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