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Reviews For: Gravitational

mistressKC 2007-04-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is beautiful. I love the melodic quality, and the way that you presented the lines just make the most wonderful rhythm. The emotions are honest, and each word speaks to my heart. Very profound. I was wondering, have you ever published any of your poetry?
Moondog Dozier 2007-04-10 ch 1,	abuseMarvelous voice, and internal thoughts. I like how this kind of lulls the reader into a comfortable pattern, and keeps the readers attention by being relatable and philosophical at the same time. I also like your use of nature, and the laws of nature in comparison to get the theme across. Excellent work.
Lynaeve 2007-03-22 ch 1,	abuseGreat poem. The imagery and metaphors in this are wonderful. I loved the line "The iron crickets screech each night Like rusty violins As I dance for acid rain." Nicely done.
crisscross-cat 2007-03-08 ch 1,	abuseI really like this, but I think if you really played around with stanza formation and line breaks more, it could really emphasize some of your lovely language. By the way, thank you very much for your kind reviews! ^.^
a silenced revolution 2007-03-05 ch 1,	abuseYou are amazingly good at metaphors. Amazing work again. ~Isabella May
Camilleta 2007-02-28 ch 1,	abuseNice, I love the last part.
Karine Dragon'sheart 2007-02-27 ch 1,	abuseOhh...Utter bliss...my one weakness is imagery. And you...you've so completely taken it to a whole other level...I don't rightly recall if I got back to you about a review, so here's a thank you anyway. ^w^ Like you, I do my best to respond to reviews...(though they've been so late lately...I'm a horrible updater V_V) Thank you though...and once more...sighs contentedly Beautiful work, m'dear... Laters, KD
His Mercy's Waiting 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseGreat last lines! They were brilliant. The whole thing was great actually. You have a wise voice as a writer. Keep writing! :)
Femme de Dieu 2007-02-16 ch 1,	abuseSo true, and good question. Reminded me somewhat of the John Mayer song "Gravity," but in a much more expanded version. We even fall to our knees, fall in love, fall out of someone's good graces, etcetera, etcetera, eh? I enjoyed reading this... and have felt the way you do for a very, Very, VERY L-O-N-G while, but have recently found a way to rise UP, and ABOVE all of it. (sighs in relief and gratitude) I wish that you may gain asccent to that which you dance for... that "something more." Ah, yes, "more." There will always be "more," m'dear, but sometimes "more isn't always better; sometimes more is just more." (Sabrina-- from the movie by the same name). Keep writing, you are an excellent wordsmith. Truly, Tourterelle
Icicle Tears 2007-02-16 ch 1,	abuse...This is one of those poems that makes you stop and consider life. Why are some things the way they are? Why must everything fall? Poetry is, to me, a lacuna, the empty space filled with words and emotions, leading up to the ideals from which a new Golden Age will be borne. That in and of itself is poetic justice. Poets, as a whole, are those who possess the ability to invision the world as it ought to be. Utopian society... Ah. What wonderful thoughts and dreams and prayers. But I digress... This poem has really made me stop and think a little. bows I thank you, поет.
Even Gods Dream 2007-02-16 ch 1,	abuseReally nice and pretty. I liked it a lot. Especially the ending.
S. Ben Beach 2007-02-14 ch 1,	abuseWow. Subtle and stunning imagery. The last lines really did it for me, because you linked the title and the theme. Which was awesome. And this is now my 50th review. Feel happy :D
Melos Atriensis 2007-02-12 ch 1,	abuseI loved the visuals! It did seem kind of long, and it took a while (at least for me) to make the connection between the poem and the meaning of the title. But I absolutely love the lines: "As ghosts rise from the dirt upturned And the trees dead, Vertically, In the ground. Progression can’t be made without sacrifice." This is worded so clearly and so beautifully. Thanks for the review! .:Scarlett:.
Gaki Toki 2007-02-10 ch 1,	abuseRather long but definitely nice at least.

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