Chiaki is so brave to take on that rapist like that, but I'm glad that she did. I really like her character's sweet and noble traits. Wonderful little chapter you have here. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I love how you calculated your character's birthdays down to the year. Also I love the flashback with Fumio, I beliveve it was. This chapter was really long, but so good that I couldn't stop reading it. I could barely manage to get 5,0 on my stories, much less nine thousand.

I just got all of your reviews on Caged Bird, so I wanted to thank you from the bottom of my heart. I'm glad that you enjoy my romance stories so much and I appreciate your reviews. I'll definitely read more of your works and this one is no exception.

Sorry that I had not had the time. I'm so terribly behind on reviews and I only owe literally over 100 to stories that I have not read chapters on yet. Xx; I'm going to go crazy.

Anyway, I really loved this chapter. It was very charming and cute. I also liked your description of the Japanese food here as well, considering many American's don't know what they are.

I rather like CLannad myself. It actually recently was released through Funimation I believe.

Hey, remember me? Yeah, sorry it took so long for me to read this. I had a really big project to do for school... then I kinda got lazy with reading all the alert sitting in my inbox... so yeah...

I really liked this chapter! Just one thing that I've noticed, though. You tend to switch from present tense and past tense from time to time. Like in the first two sentences: "It is currently a nice, hot (not humid) and sunny day here in Tokyo. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, the carefree people are busy, and everything was good." The first one is in present tense, and the second one is in past tense. I know, I do that unconsciously too sometimes, so don't worry about it too much :)

Well, all in all, nice job! I'm looking forward to reading the next one (even though I could just click that button and go to the next chapter... but I still have 90 others to read).

Sorry that it took so long to respond back. Works been a mess for me.

Now on to the important!

This was also a very good chapter. Nice description on Bara. I like her name a lot as well! So far I like Bara and Tanjin the best!

Thank you for the review!

~Much love and Many Hugs~

Niki

This was neat. wonder who the mystery blond is. Also I think Tanji is a very cute character. Very nicely done.


Thank you for R&R HoPS. ^_^ It is truly appreciated!

it's good that he has friends now and all of them are girls...
hahaha, ayu's so cool with that IQ sentence...^^
Konata is a strong girl since her personality is so optimistic...
and as for Kagami, very cute..., and her words sure was deep ^^
ok, that's it for chapter two...
wondering who is the unconscious girl...
bye bye :]

oh, very good start...
Tajin is so adorable...^^
and the last scene is terribly cute...
sui-chan cannot wait to read to other chapters...
bye bye :]

This is very interesting. Love the detail and character development. Its obvious that you did some good research. ^_^. Very nice. Thank you for reading K.Vamp!

Sorry I didn't read/review until now. I've been really busy with schoolwork lately. Anyways, I thought that was another good chapter! I liked how Mai used sleeping gas to help Tajin escape. Oh, and that flashback was sad. I feel really bad for Chiaki, but the hide-and-seek flashback was really cute! Well, once again, nice job =)

Aw... poor Tajin! I was really surprised when Toki suddenly attacked Tajin. I feel so bad for him! But that scene with him and Mai was really sweet. Well, this was another nice chapter. Good work!

Aww... poor Hikaru. That flashback scene with his mother was really sad. But the one with him and Kagami was both sweet and cute :D Oh, and this doensn't really have much to do with the story, but I have a friend named Manami, just like Hikaru's “sister”. Anyways, it was another nice chapter :D

Aww... that chapter was really sweet, especially that scene where Kagami was 'giving' Akane to Kobayashi-sensei. Oh, and I also liked that dream scene; it was a lot like Tajin's in one of the earlier chapters, right? Well anyways, it was another nice chapter :D Oh, and by the way, keep up the good work with chapter 39. I hear it's gonna be really epic! I can't wait until I get caught up, so I can read it! Gambatte!!

Sorry I didn't review until now. Homework is very, very annoying. Anyways...now I'm really intereseted. I really want to see if Akane-chan is going to survive! And no, I haven't heard of Lucky Star before, but I'm going to check it out now! :) And yes, I am a fan of the Phoenix Wright games. And that's so cool; you should try playing them :D Okay, this is more of a ramble than a review... sorry about that. Well, once again, I thought this chapter was very nicely done!

That was really cool how Bara was able to make a catalyst just like that, from watching all the other scientists. Oh, and Akane was really cute :D I hope she survives! Well, I guess I have to wait and find out. Once again, very nice work!