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| under the influence 2007-02-21 ch 1,  | abuseI've been there...not fun. you've captured the emotion perfectly...I hope that you are not still feeling this way now. |
| psychotic aiba lover 2007-02-11 ch 1, | abuseomg! youre so emo nyahhahahha :D great poem..i heard you were thinking of me when you wrote that... :) |
| Kairi Uzeniba 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very deep. I hope you can get over him and find someone who actually loves you. kAiRi Of UzEnIbA cLaN |
| Poisoned-musician 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abusewow powerful piece. this happens to everyone, you find that you cant stop loving someone even though they are with someone else. its a horrible feel of dispare. you wrote this so well. i also like the afect of some on the lines, joining the words make them seem strong and more alive. this piece is amazing. |