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Careless Whisperer
2008-05-08
ch 13,
abusejust noticed this story.its good:))don't know why there are only around 40 reviews but nevermind,keep it up!
Open Yazumi's Heart Skulls
2008-03-31
ch 13,
abuseyou must update this, I'm so into this story, I never get in to non fanfictions the way I got into this, it was driving me crazy! Keep up the good work. ^.^




~Yazumi & Skulls / Mika
WordsKingdoms
2008-02-22
ch 12,
abusePlease update??
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2008-01-22
ch 12,
abusei agree with the "please update!" contingent. where's the end?!

i like the pace. and i love poor suffering aubrey to death, but it's hard for me to picture him as a guy sometimes (lol) and poor tatsuya!
Ayakaishi Fei
2007-11-03
ch 12, anon.
abuseDon't worry Tatsuya! I will comfort you!
...I mean, wow, I really like this. It deserves more than 36 reviews, but I guess there are alot of lazy people out there who can't be bothered to let you know they've read it.
I like your characters, they are concisely described, and they are developing at a realistic pace. My favourite character is Tatsuya, because he seems so sweet and he got used, but I don't dislike Aubrey for using him - I know that I have been guilty of using people, and that Aubrey knew enough to stop makes him all the more admirable.
Camdyn and Annika are less likable at present, but at the same time it is understandable - it isn't intentional, but that first love kind of blinds you to anyone but the person you're sharing it with, and you write it well from an outsiders perspective.

Your writing style is very clean, it isn't riddled with mistakes, and it doesn't go round in circles, you have a good balance between dialogue and description - it's a pleasure to read. There is some room to improve, but I've seen it improve just from chapter one.

I hope to see this continued and completed. (p.s. u don't need to return any reviews to me as my writing on this site is all about 4 years old)
DRAGONFIRE04
2007-06-05
ch 12,
abusePlease update this great story.
Kharris Kyryn
2007-03-11
ch 12,
abuseoh!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
this story's rele great so far
^.^
~kharris
FoxyGrampa
2007-03-11
ch 12,
abuseAubrey needs to get a back bone. But that's just his character, ne? Anyway, hopefully the next couple of chapters should tie everything up--I was left a bit disappointed in this chapter, as I was expecting something more Camdyn related to happen, but oh well.

I'll be reading your update.
elsiey
2007-03-11
ch 12,
abuseWow... My heart goes out all to Tatsuya here. The shock, the hurt... ToT But I guess I would have been angry at Aubrey if he just left everything as it was and let him kiss him, because that would have been SO wrong, so yeah... This turn of events was much better than the alternative.

Argh, the suspense... Camdyn's actions in this chapter really sparked my interest. What was Camdyn gonna say to Aubrey? lol, I keep imagining that Camdyn broke it off with Annika or they're not doing too well, and Camdyn is frustrated and wants to talk to Aubrey... But I have a feeling that's just me getting carried away with my imagination. Really love the developments so far and looking forward to the next chapter!!

And btw, I didn' think the chapter took long to come out. XD I'm used to waiting for months for the next chapter, so to see someone update so quickly is amazing. XD
FoxyGrampa
2007-03-11
ch 11,
abuseCamdyn's a ** friend. No, really, he'd b etter have good reasons for ignoring his best friend. Annika too. x_x I can't imagine anyone doing that without good reasons, though, so I hope they crop up later. xD;

Reading on~
Midnights Scream
2007-03-11
ch 11,
abuseI'm glad he knows he's scum, because he is *nods* poor Tatsuya. *sniffle* and I can imagince Camdyn jealous and things are going to get complicated with everyone and they're going to get the wrong idea and everything will be drama filled. :) I'm looking forward to it.
FoxyGrampa
2007-03-11
ch 10,
abuseTatsuya seems cute. I feel bad for him though--I know Aubrey won't end up with him. I'm too good at predicting outcomes. '_'

I'll be reading on. I'm catchin' up. Haha.
Liteupmynight
2007-03-11
ch 12,
abuseAww poor Tatsuya :( And I really wanted to know what Camdyn was going to say :( So please please please write more soon. I can't wait to read it.
FoxyGrampa
2007-03-11
ch 9,
abuseYou know, I just realized this is somewhat like my situation was a couple months ago. 'Cept I'm not a guy like Aubrey, and it was much more of a shock. 8D; I actually probably would've been a lot less upset if it had been as gradual of a realization as this...

Anyway, that's all long over. xD Good chapter, I'll read more later~
CarmenTakoshi
2007-03-11
ch 12,
abuseTT_TT Poor little Aubrey. I'm so sad for him. Although I can't help but admire the sane-steady way in which he deals with things. That's something I really enjoy about your story here. :) He's not emo like most manga and anime protagonists, which I find... refreshing?

Tatsuya. TT_TT That poor thing.

Don't worry about sporadic updates. Every chapter is worth the wait! Until next time.
~Carmen
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