Aww. So sad. I like it. Lol. Sad ending. Almost wish it had been different, but I like it. I'm the happy ending kinda girl. Lol.

Wow that was pretty good. I liked the twist ending, I really didn't expect that at all. It was definitely really creepy. Maybe you chould make into a little bit of a longer story or something. But as it is, it's still good.